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“The Sacrifice”: Part one

This is it!!!

I hope you’re all as excited as I am!  After a year of waiting, this is it!  I decided to just surprise you all, and not tell anyone it was coming. 🙂

I’d like to thank all my friends that  helped me break up writer’s block–the ones I e-mailed and snail-mailed (love you girls, Ellen and Savannah!) and everyone who commented on posts like this.  And my parents, who proof-read this story and helped me sift the typos and inconsistencies.  I really appreciate you guys!

Okay, quick note and then I’ll let you read: I’m going to be posting twice a week, on Tuesday and Friday.  There are close to thirty parts, so even posting twice a week this could take up quite a bit of the summer!  The Mushroom Feast was the longest story before, with thirteen parts, and The Sacrifice is over twice as long!

Anyway, I’ll stop now.  Enjoy!

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Part First: When the Flowers Bloom. . .

The great mountain-range stretched far South; running hundreds of miles, peak after snow-capped peak. Very near the center of the long line was a wide valley, green with grass. It was surrounded by mountains, and in the middle of it was a city. Around this city ran a high wall of gray stone, with great black gates facing West. Inside the wall were houses and huts and small gardens, and smooth, narrow streets, where the townspeople lived; and in the very center of it all stood a castle, its tall, gray towers rising high into the air like the mountain-peaks around it, topped with fluttering, white flags like the snow-crowned crags of the range. In this castle dwelt the King and Queen of the Valley, Cedric and Eleanor. They had two children: Prince Henry, who was the heir to the throne, and his younger sister, nineteen-year-old Penelope.

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Stopping In

Hey, guys!  Just wanted to stop in and say that I am thisclose to finishing The Sacrifice, and if I’m a little sparse around here for a while, it’s because I’m writing and editing as much as I can!

I’m really excited about how it’s going, and I’m hoping to get it up here soon!  I think I can realistically say I could start posting it before March, but I also thought I could start posting it at the new year, so. . .  Just goes to show that stories aren’t quite as tame as some people think.  I’ll do my best.

What about my dog?” he added, noticing Cyrus hesitating between his master and the horse he had followed all day.  “You can take him in with you, if you want.” The boy shrugged despondently. “They don’t mind.”  Sir Richard whistled to Cyrus and walked inside, wondering why everyone here was so downcast.

Loveliness

And so they stood on the walls of the City of Gondor, and a great wind rose and blew, and their hair, raven and golden, streamed out mingling in the air. (941)

The Lord of the Rings: The Return of the King by J.R.R. Tolkien

This paints such a pretty picture, doesn’t it?

Snow!!!

I’m crazy.

I’ve often thought so, but This?

This proves it.

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It’s been snowing all morning–big, fluffy, beautiful flakes–and I went out for a few minutes earlier and did archery in it.

I can now say I have done target practice in the rain and the snow.  Granted, I didn’t stay out very long this morning due to cold and frost-covered arrows that make your fingers feel like they’re about to fall off; but I’ve done it.

There has to be a story where someone shoots arrows in the snow, right?  Or do I have to write that one too?

Anyway, enjoy the snow, if you have it, and if not, then enjoy whatever weather you’re having!

Happy Monday!

A Gift

It’s Christmas!!!  The greatest gift in the world was given today!

And that’s why Christmas is a time of giving.

So I thought I would post these now, as a present to all my faithful readers.  These are three pictures I drew of things in The Sacrifice, and I thought I would post them to tide you guys over.

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Unfortunately, I wasn’t considering the Christmastime busyness when I planned our fall/winter schedule, and I haven’t been getting in as much writing and editing as I had hoped.  And editing is turning out to be a bigger job than I had expected, and I’m considering leaving out a character because he doesn’t play a very major role.  So. . . The Sacrifice might be a little later than I thought.  I’m very sorry, and I’ll get it up here as soon as I can.

Thank you all for your patience and your enthusiasm!

★ ★ ★  Merry Christmas!!★ ★ ★

Something More

When someone in your family has a birthday, it makes you want to do something nice for them.  You want to make them feel special.  It’s easy to tell someone “happy birthday!”, and it usually makes them feel good.  But would we be willing to do something more?

We can have the right mentality about Christmas, but that doesn’t feel like enough, does it?

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