Module 8 Story #3

So, I went totally haywire yesterday and started writing a story.

That doesn’t sound so bad, until you realize that I’m in the middle of writing three stories right now, and I wasn’t going to start any more until I had finished those.

But I got inspiration for a new story, and the whole thing came right then.  RIGHT THEN.  I got the beginning, the middle, the end–in one sitting.  So I thought since it came all at once, I’d write it down all at once.

I was having serious writer’s block on The Sacrifice anyway.  I think it’s because I just switched which character I’m following, so I’m following a man, and I have a harder time with men.  That’s probably just because I’m a girl.  I think it will go faster again if I just get back to it… which I still plan to, don’t worry.  I wasn’t going to start posting it until this summer anyway, because I realized I should wait until I was done posting science stories; because posting them in the middle of The Sacrifice could get really confusing.

And speaking of science stories, that’s what this is actually all about (as you probably guessed from the title).  So, after all that, let’s get on with the story:

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Uncle Zade was in the kitchen eating breakfast when I came down. Mom and Dad were still in their bedroom.

“You look nice,” Zade told me, as I got myself a bowl of cereal and milk.

I took a deep breath. Didn’t he know I would just as soon have worn jeans but my parents wanted me to dress up for church? “Thanks.”

“You sound despondent.”

“Do I?” I tried to look naive.

My uncle laughed. “A bit. How’d you sleep?”

Too well. I wasn’t done thinking. “Fine. How about you?”

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Favorite Characters

So, when I decided to do book reviews the second month, I thought I would go through the ones I had already done and give you a list of all my favorite characters from them.  I’m a little late, but here we are:

(I went ahead and added the first two reviews I did, even though they were not for my monthly review thing.)

Counted Worthy by Leah E. Good – Hmm… this is hard.  All of her characters are very human, and very relatable… and I like all almost all  of them!  I think Miss Lucy is my all-time favorite.

Beowulf translated by J.R.R. Tolkien – King Hrothgar

The Princess and the Goblin by George MacDonald – Curdie or his mother

The Sign of the Beaver by Elizabeth George Speare – Maybe Matt’s little sister or Attean’s, but I don’t remember either of their names.  I think Matt’s was Sarah…

Waltz into the Waves by Sarah Holman – I can’t tell you, because it would give away the ending 🙂

Great Expectations by Charles Dickens – Joe Gargery

I think I’m going to do this at the end of every month, so I’m going to wait and do all the April ones together.

Unless this stuff bores you… do you want more?  Maybe it’s just me.  I’m “into” favorite characters.  I mean, I can’t say what my favorite part of each book is, because… I like happy endings. 🙂

See ya, guys! 🙂

??? {Mystery Quote #3} ???

Phew!  It’s been two weeks!  Did any of you guess during that bonus week?  Anyway:

Last week’s quote came from The Hobbit by J.R.R Tolkien.  Ellen and Becca guessed the right author–and fantasy world! 🙂 (You’re first guess was right, Ellen.)

I was going to include this part of the quote:

Elves know a lot and are wondrous folk for news, and know what is going on among the peoples of the lands, as quick as water flows, or quicker. (50)

But ‘elves’ definitely would have had to go, and what in the world do you put in the brackets?  [they]?  I don’t know.  So I just cut it off.  Now, for this week’s quote:

A gift.  Was it?  [She] hunched over and hid her face in her ash-smeared hands, resisting the impulse to bang her forehead on the aged stone floor.  And yet… and yet… if she refused, would she ever hear His voice again?

I think this is a pretty obvious one for those of you who have read the book, but maybe not.  It also probably doesn’t make any sense if you haven’t! 🙂

Happy guessing, as Leah would say!

Module 8 Story #2

I didn’t do school last week, because I was sick; and I was at a conference on Thursday and Friday (pictures coming later, I hope) so I wasn’t able to do it then either… so getting geared up today was a bit of a challenge.  It did feel surprisingly normal to just be studying, though.

Okay: part two of my story!  Not quite every day so far, but getting close. 🙂  The computer won’t keep my font this time for some reason. *sigh*  Oh well!  It works.

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Later that night after dinner, I pounced on Uncle Zade and asked him to show me. I helped him rummage up three-by-five cards and a pen, then obediently went into the living-room while he worked. When he called me back in, he had laid the cards out in five rows of four. He had drawn symbols on all the cards: the first row went circle, triangle, heart, star; the second went smiley-face, circle, triangle, heart; the third smiley-face, circle, heart, star; the fourth smiley-face, circle, triangle, star; the fifth smiley-face, triangle, heart, star. Off to the side was a circle, a triangle, a star, a heart, and a smiley-face. I looked at the set-up skeptically.

“Okay,” Uncle Zade began. I want you to put those five that are not in rows into theses rows in such a way that all the rows look the same.” I looked them over, and found that each row was missing one symbol. I managed to sort them all out into five rows of smiley-face, circle, triangle, heart, star.

“Well done!” he said, looking over my shoulder. “So this is how we use index fossils. No rock formation has all the fossils, but if we have all the rock formations to help us, we can piece this together.

“Cool.”

“But those examples of fossils I was using earlier today—do you remember that?”

“The plants and dinosaurs?”

“Yes, those. That order is actually from a geological column, that I believe is accurate.”

“What’s a geological column?”

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Spring!

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The waste-land and the dry land will be glad.
The desert will be full of joy and become like a rose.

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Many flowers will grow in it, and it will be filled with joy and singing.

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The greatness of Lebanon will be given to it, and the  beauty of Carmel and Sharon.

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They will see the shining-greatness of the Lord, the wonderful power of our God.

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Give strength to weak hands and to weak knees.
Say to those whose heart is afraid,
“Have strength of heart, and do not be afraid.”

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-Isaiah 35:1-4 NLV

 

 

Module 8 Story #1

I’m still coughing a bit, but today I really felt like myself for the first time since Monday.

And, of course, it was raining.  Oh well!  Who cares?  It was still a good day.  We sat on the front porch and watched the rain for a while like we always do when it pours, and I really enjoyed that.  Actually, I don’t mind rain that much, I just wanted to go outside and take pictures of the flowers today.  I’ll have all summer though, so we’ll be okay. 🙂

Anyway, I’m posting my next science story randomly when I feel like it so I can still do “Mystery Quote”.  (Do you guys like that as much as I do?)

The pictures is of a statue at a park in China.  It isn’t perfect for the story, but it works.  Isn’t it neat?  I love how that turned out! 🙂

The name of Module 8 was “Uniformitarianism and Catastrophism” which is pretty much Evolution and Creationism.  So… I got a little deep with this one.  It’s also very serious, not funny like the other one; but I think it turned out well.

I wrote this one in first person too.  Can’t say why.  Maybe because the first one was, so now I just think that way about science.  It’s also about a girl that’s about my age like the first one… I could have made them the same person, but I didn’t want to.  Enjoy!

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My dear reader,

This chapter in my science book was about Uniformitarianism and Catastrophism, which is essentially how different people believe the earth formed. Dr. Wile made a point to say that he was biased, but would try to treat both sides with the same amount of criticism. He also pointed out that everyone is biased, so if you want a clear idea of both sides you should read things that were written by people who had different views and compare them. I, then, am also biased. But I am making no attempt to be even-handed. I am a Catastrophist, and that is the view that I am going to stress.

I also borrowed some of this information from other modules in my science book. Enjoy!

~H.M.R. on 3/30/15

The screen door squeaked loudly behind me as I closed it. I stood for a moment in front of it listening to the chaos of voices and drinking in the coolness of the house. It was steaming outside. I felt hot and sweaty, and was aware that my face was probably red. Playing tag in ninety degree weather was not prudent. Anybody could have told me that before I started running around, but all the other kids were doing it and I couldn’t help myself.

I navigated my way slowly through the kitchen to the orange water-cooler. There were way too many people at this party. It was at my house and I hadn’t even talked to all the guests—truth be told, I didn’t even know all their names. I finally reached the cooler and got a drink. I gulped the whole cupful and used my fingers to fish out ice-cubes; crunching them slowly and relishing the icy chill.

Someone bumped into me at that moment, and I nearly fell over. Good thing I had already drunk my water! “Oh! I’m so sorry! Are you okay, Sweetie?” the woman apologized. “Yeah, I’m fine,” I answered and wondered what her name was and how I was related to her as I watched her walk away. Big families could be inconvenient. My Dad was the youngest of three, but my Mom had nine siblings, and I couldn’t keep track of all that. Not when I only saw them twice or thrice a year! Well, at least they were still willing to come over. I didn’t understand why it was such a big deal we started going to church. I mean, nobody else did, but it still didn’t have to be this big a deal. At least my cousins understood that I only went because my parents wanted me to. I hadn’t told the kids at school yet—and hopefully I would never have to.

Really, they all only came over because Uncle Zade was staying with us so it was only natural that the party, reunion, or whatever-it-was should be at our place. Zade wasn’t actually my uncle, he was my Mom’s cousin. But I had called him that for as long as I could remember. My Mom had no brothers her age and she had always been way too rambunctious for her sisters, so her and Zade had played together when they were little. He and my Mom were still really close and even if he didn’t share their new ideas, he still wanted to stay at our house like always.  I was thankful for that.  Of all our many relatives, I would have missed his friendship the most.

Uncle Zade was sitting at a nearby table all by himself, the person sitting next to him having gone to greet someone who was just walking in the door. He noticed me trying to flattened myself against the wall to stay out of somebody’s way, and beckoned to me. Uncle Zade and I were close too. I couldn’t figure out when it had started, but somehow we became friends during one of his visits, and we e-mailed with each other now when he left. He technically lived in Texas, but he spent most of his time traveling the world as a geologist. Mom had always enjoyed watching our friendship bloom, probably thinking about the adventures she had had with Zade; and had always approved of our keeping in touch while he was gone—until now. Now she was uneasy about it because she knew he was telling me about evolution. Last year my parents had loved how much he was teaching me, and now I caught them talking about it in concerned voices because he was encouraging me to veer off away from Creationism. I didn’t understand this sudden change in them.

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Manners

“Drat that boy,” interposed my sister, frowning at me over her work, “what a questioner he is.  Ask no questions, and you’ll be told no lies.”  It was not very polite to herself, I thought, to imply that I should be told lies by her, even if I did ask questions.  But she never was polite, unless there was company. (10)

Great Expectations by Charles Dickens

April Book Reviews: Johnny Tremain

When we were really little Becca, Spencer, and I studied the Revolution, and Mama read Johnny Tremain by Esther Forbes out-loud to us.  I am studying the Revolution by myself this year, and I just re-read Johnny Tremain on my own.  I did not remember much about it, so it was still very suspenseful!

This book is about a fourteen-year-old boy (well, he is fourteen at the beginning, but I think he is sixteen by the end) named Johnny who is the apprentice of a silversmith.  Mr. Lapham has two other apprentices, but Johnny is the strongest, the smartest, and the most skilled.

Although two years younger than the swinish Dove, inches shorter, pounds lighter, he knew, and old Mr. Lapham knew, busy Mrs. Lapham and her four daughters and Dove and Dusty also knew, that Johnny Tremain was boss of the attic, and almost of the house. (8)

His smith work bringing in most of the money that supported the Lapham household Johnny spent most of his days in the shop, bullying and criticizing the other apprentices, helping Mr. Lapham keep orders straight, and listening to his mistress’ daughters insulting compliments.

Until he burned his hand in an accident in the shop, and was rendered unable to practice his craft.  Once the ‘boss’ of the house, Johnny was then looked upon as a nuisance and begins to look for another job he can do.

Arrogant, ashamed of his crippled hand, left without work, unaccustomed to being an outcast he struggles in this new life.

Those marketwomen who had counted their pats of butter after he brushed past their stands, Mrs. Lapham with her prophecies that he would end on the gallows, had not been so far wrong.  For a little while it had been touch-and-go with him.  If pushed a little farther, he might have taken to crime–because that was what was expected of him. (109)

When he finally found work he was drawn into a whole new circle of people.  He began to pay attention to politics, and met people like Samuel Adams and Paul Revere–he also begins to discover things about himself and his own life.

After that Johnny began to watch himself.  For the first time he learned to think before he spoke.  He counted ten that day he delivered a paper at Sam Adams’s big shabby house down on Purchase Street and the black girl flung dishwater out of the kitchen door without looking, and soaked him.  If he had not counted ten, he would have told her what he thought of her, black folk in general, and thrown in a few cutting remarks about her master–the most powerful man in Boston.  But counting ten had its rewards.  Sukey apologized handsomely.  In the past he had never given anyone time to apologize. (109)

I am glad that I read this book, but parts of it were very frustrating!  It is very suspenseful–and some of the answer do not get answered… yet another great, good-but-not-perfect-ending book! 🙂  It was very real.  Not ‘story-bookish’.

There were also some pretty fierce parts (that I think Mama skipped the first time she read it to us), so kids might want to have a parent preview it.

This is a really good book though, and very well written.  I do not really feel qualified to write a review about this one either–hence all the quotes! 🙂

Hundreds would die, but not the thing they died for. (269)

Authors

The truth is, it pains me to ever say anything remotely negative about a book.  It’s like saying someone’s child isn’t cute.

Flower Patch Farmgirl

We authors are a strange breed… 🙂

 

P.S. You can still comment on my “Mystery Quote” post… until next Tuesday.  Always.*

*So I can stop adding this to my Wednesday posts! 🙂